More Changes to the trailer

Yet again iv decided to make some changes in the way i shoot my trailer. It was going to be starting out as a romantic, with the main woman and man getting to know each other. Then in between these clips i was going to show some fast, flashing gore scenes. It would then finish with showing the audience that the man in the love scenes is the same man that killing these other woman.
However once i had shot some of my trailer and id started editing i found it wasn't as fast paced as i first thought, and slightly boring, which i did not want. Therefore i decided to change around how i shot it. This was my new idea:
I still wanted to start it looking like a romantic, that way i could still use the shots i already done too. In between some shots when it faded to black writing would come up saying, something along the lines of: "Love is supposed to be a beautiful thing...." "But what happens when...." "You fall in love with a serial killer?...." The dots mean there's clips in between those bits of writing.
After the last bit of writing, the music speeds up and gets louder. Then there will be lots of shots of the murderer chasing and killing girls. This will make my trailer a lot more fast paced and exciting, by making the majority of the trailer a thriller instead of romantic. It will end this way too. At one point i might show a clip of the murderer with the woman hes fell in love with, just to make sure the audience knows it's not her he's killing but other women. Also this will make a nice quiet break in the excitement to really show the contrast.

Inspirations:
The movie trailer i watched that really inspired me and made me think to shoot my trailer this way was the 2008 movie 'Prom Night'.






It has the same narrative in the trailer as i want my trailer to have. It starts out looking like a romantic but then kicks into a thriller to surprise the audience.